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Adaeze Okafor (Human, civilian, sister of Dr. Wren Okafor)

Time
2715 UCSD, One Year After
Location
Solar Command, Mars — MSC Casualty Correspondence Office

The form letter had arrived eleven months ago, and Adaeze had read it so many times she could recite it in the specific tone she imagined the drafting officer had used, which was no tone at all: The Military Space Command regrets to confirm that the vessel Patience First, having departed Eden Space Habitat without operational authorisation, falls outside the scope of Command liability, inquiry findings, or survivor support. This correspondence closes the matter absent new information.

She had written back nine times. Nine times, a variation of the same reply had come, each one slightly more polite and no more informative than the last, until the tenth letter had gone unanswered entirely, which was when Adaeze had stopped trusting the correspondence channel to be a channel at all rather than a wall built to look like one from her side only.

So she had taken the transit to Mars herself, on savings that would not survive a second trip, to sit across a desk from whichever officer the Casualty Correspondence Office assigned her and make him say the sentence to her face instead of printing it.

He was younger than she'd expected. That threw her, slightly, in a way she resented being thrown by anything today.

"Lieutenant Voss," he said, standing when she was shown in, which was more courtesy than eleven months of letters had managed between them.

"My sister flew on a ship your Command has spent a year telling me you have no obligation to explain." She did not sit down immediately, because sitting felt like an agreement to be managed, and she had come too far to be managed. "I'm not here about liability, Lieutenant. I know what that word means in your letters. I'm here because 'unauthorised, therefore' is not an answer to the only question I actually asked, which was what happened to her."

"I understand that."

"Do you. Because the letters don't read like understanding. They read like a form that got the word 'closed' into the last sentence early enough that nobody had to write another one."

Voss did not flinch from that, which she gave him credit for, cautiously, the way she'd learned to give credit to anyone in a uniform since this began — provisionally, revocable at the first sign it was performance rather than fact.

"I don't have an answer past the one you've already been given," he said. "I want to be honest with you about that before you spend any more of this meeting hoping I do. Patience First left without authorisation. That fact is what the classification is built on, and the classification is what determines what obligations attach — legal ones, financial ones, search-continuation ones. I know that's not the question you asked. It's the only question this office has actually been given the authority to answer."

"Then who has the authority to answer mine?"

"I don't know if anyone does yet," Voss said, and something in the plainness of it landed differently than the letters ever had, because a letter could not have afforded to sound uncertain and this man, apparently, could. "I've read the file. Six names, one classification, and a committee structure that took eleven months to answer a fold-route anomaly report before your sister ever launched. I'm not defending that to you. I'm telling you I've seen the same gap you're describing, from the other side of the desk, and I don't currently have a rank that lets me close it."

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