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A young Japanese woman in a plain grey work jacket with a small white tab bearing one black stroke at the collar stands writing in a spiral notebook, looking down at the open lid of a lost-property container in front of her, where six clear bags are laid out in a row, each holding one small object and a blank paper slip: a stylus, a clip, a spoon, a reel of tape, a pair of glasses, a rubber stamp. Behind her a records room of the far future, seamless pale panels curving into the ceiling, a recessed line of soft light, and a low sealed unit with no handles.

Detective Priya Nakamura (Human)

Time
2827 UCSD, Summer
Location
Eden Space Habitat, Detective Bureau and the records room

She filed nothing, because there was nothing to file. A test with a compromised control is not a result; it is a lesson about the room, and the lesson was that a floor with a night pass on it has three moving parts, not two.

Her closing note in the notebook said that, in those words, and it was true, and it was also the first sentence she had written in six days that she did not entirely believe. She read it twice and let it stand.

The Superintendent came past her desk that afternoon on the way to the briefing, glanced at the notebook, which was closed, and said nothing, in the specific way she says nothing when she has added a mark to a list nobody has seen. Nakamura did not ask what the mark was for. A detective learns which questions are hers to leave open, and she had two now: one about a rabbit, which she had closed by the only method available, and one about a cat, which she had not opened, and did not intend to, and had written down anyway.

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