S09E01C02

The Door With the Plant

Time
2828 UCSD, Early Spring — the first week
Location
Eden Space Habitat, Fold-Approach Watch and the corridor outside it
  • young-star-rangers
  • star-rangers
  • eden
  • boundary-watch
  • deputy
  • first-posting

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Scene 1

Deputy Officer Iklix Varn (Human)

On the fourth day there was someone at the plant.

The hatch had its number and nothing else, and it sat where it had sat on the first day, between a door with a name on it and a door with a plant outside it, and for three days Varn had come along the ring at the hour the shift changed and found the corridor doing what the corridor did, which was not look. On the fourth day a person about Varn's own age was crouched at the plant with a watering can, and looked up, and said, "You're the hatch."

Varn said, "Deputy Officer Varn."

"I know." He pointed, not quite at the tab, at the place on his own collar where a tab would go. "I looked it up. Three bars." He had the kind of face that had been about to say something else and had decided against it, and the can was full, and the plant did not look as though it needed the whole can. "Sorry. I'll get out of your way."

He did not entirely get out of the way. Varn went through the hatch and stood one step further from the desk than there was any reason to stand, and the six lights held, and the shift was the shift, and at the end of it Varn wrote what happened and Smith initialled it, and when Varn came out he was gone and the plant was wet.

On the fifth day he was there again.

The Academy teaches a Deputy to read a room for who in it has noticed you, and it teaches this early and well, because most of the rooms a Ranger walks into have somebody in them who has, and it matters which one. What it does not teach is what to do when the room is a corridor and the somebody is one person with a watering can. Varn had three readings and went through them on the way to the hatch. It was coincidence: a plant, a schedule, an hour that happened to be the hour. It was not coincidence, and somebody on the ring wanted to know when the Corps came and went, which was the kind of thing an intake file said note about. Or it was the third thing, which Varn was slowest to name, because naming it meant admitting it had a shape: that on a side of the ring where nobody looked at the hatch, one person had looked, and looked up the tab, and was here at the hour with a full can, and that the reason for that might be the tab. A joke about it. A courtesy that was a way of saying three bars, behind a door nobody opens.

He said, "What's behind it?"

Varn said what could be supported. "A watch."

"What does it watch?"

"It doesn't."

He laughed. It was not a long laugh and there was nothing in it that Varn could have written down, and it landed somewhere Varn could not see, and Varn did the thing a Deputy does when a Deputy does not know where they stand, which was take one step back. Not far. One. The honest step, the one a Deputy stands from a desk.

He stopped laughing. Something in his face closed the way a hatch closes, without a sound, and he said, "Right. Sorry, Deputy," and the word had changed shape between the two times he had used it, and he picked up the can, which was still nearly full, and went in at the door with the plant outside it.

Varn went through the hatch. The six lights were the colour they were. Smith looked up and said, "Varn," as a fact, and Varn stood one step too far from the desk and could not have said, if the log had asked, why the shift felt as though it had one line too many in it.

Field Officer Zoe Smith (Human)

The plant had been outside that door for longer than Smith had stood the watch. The person watering it had not.

She knew him the way she knew most of the ring, which was by small things and at a distance: Noah Adeyemi, nineteen or twenty, grown on Eden, working a shift somewhere on the Compact side that let him off at the hour hers changed. The plant was watered on the sixth day of every week by whoever lived behind that door, and had been for years, and was doing well on it. It did not need a full can on a fourth day. It certainly did not need one on a fifth. She had watched him arrange, over three days, to be crouched at it when the hatch opened, and she had watched him fail on the first of those days to say the thing he had come to say, and say three bars instead, which was the nearest true thing to hand.

That was one signal, and she read it without difficulty, because it was the oldest one on any ring. Somebody the same age had arrived behind a hatch. It was not surveillance, and it was not a joke about the tab. It was the ordinary thing, sent the ordinary way, by somebody who had never had a reason to learn what a tab on that side of the ring meant and had gone and looked it up so as not to get it wrong.

The second signal she read as easily, and it was her Deputy's.

Varn had taken a step back from him. She had seen it through the hatch, which she had left on the latch, as she left it most days, for the reason that a compartment nobody looks at should not also be a compartment nobody can hear. The step was the same step Varn took from her desk. She had told fourteen Deputies nothing about that step, on the grounds that it was not a mistake but a report: an honest account of where a Deputy thought they stood. That was still true. What she had never had cause to think about, in fourteen Deputies, was that a report is read by whoever is standing in front of it, and that a step which says I do not know where I stand to an officer says something else entirely to a person with a watering can. It says you are a resident and I am the Corps. It says the tab is a rank after all. He had heard that, and he had said Deputy the second time the way people said it on the Compact side, as a courtesy, and gone in.

Neither of them had been wrong about what they saw. Each had been wrong about what it meant. She had a whole file of that, from a whole career, and none of it was in the file.

She considered, for about the length of one ninety-second agreement between the instruments, whether it was hers to say. The doctrine was clear enough. An officer says what can be supported, and what she could support was that two people had each done one true thing and each read the other's as something it was not, which was most of what happened on a ring on any given day and none of it the watch's business. She could not have logged it. There was no form. If she said it, she would be telling a Deputy what a thing meant, and she had built fourteen assessments on never once doing that.

So she said nothing, and initialled the log, and watched Varn stand a step too far from the desk, which was where the fourteen had all stood, and which she had stopped minding years ago. What she noted, because it was the kind of small thing that turned out later to mean something or nothing, was that this one had taken the step outside the hatch as well. That was new. The others had kept it for her.

The watch does not watch anything, she had said, on the first day, the way she said it to all of them. It stands where it is, and it is the nearest qualified officer to the event if the event comes.

She had never told a Deputy that the rule was also advice. She did not tell this one either. It was not an entry.

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