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A weathered woman in a grey wool coat and scarf on a misty rocky upland pasture, shepherd's crook in hand, sheep grazing among lichen-covered volcanic stones behind her

Órla Shepherd (Human, Tír na nÓg)

Time
2831 UCSD, Early Autumn — Afternoon Arrival Through Morning Departure
Location
Tír na nÓg, Boirinn Uplands — the Shepherd holding, then the Union shuttle gate

Órla had known her daughter was different since the second year of training, when Tissadelle stopped saying I think and started saying I haven't confirmed that yet — a small change, but Órla had raised her and knew the shape of every sentence she owned. She had watched the girl's letters get shorter and more exact for four years and had told herself, mostly successfully, that exactness was not the same as distance.

Watching her stop dead at the edge of the Hollow told her otherwise.

The Hollow had rules older than the charter Tissadelle served under, older than the Union itself, carried down through six generations of women who had never once agreed on why the rules worked, only that they did. Leave the water clear. Don't cut the pale wood. Don't linger past dusk. Órla's own mother had called it respect. Órla, who had less patience for unexplained respect, had called it a habit worth keeping regardless, and left it there.

Her daughter was not going to leave it there. Órla could see the calculation running behind her eyes — the same look she used to bring home from cadet leave, back when she still apologized for it.

"You're not going to write this down," Órla said. It came out flatter than she meant it to, more like a boundary than a question.

"I'm not authorised to," Tissadelle said. "I have no standing here. None of this is Ranger ground."

"That's not what I asked."

Tissadelle was quiet long enough that Órla braced for the answer she'd been expecting since the girl first shipped out — some kindly, professional deflection, the kind strangers gave when they'd learned not to promise things. It didn't come.

"I'm not going to file it," her daughter said instead. "But I'm not going to leave you with just the rule, either. You should have the reason. You've earned the reason." A pause, the same pause she used to take before admitting she didn't know something, back before four years taught her to sound certain regardless. "It'll cost you the mystery. I don't know if that's a fair trade."

Órla thought about six generations of women keeping a rule they'd never been given the reason for, and about the particular, careful way her daughter had just offered to spend something official on something that was only theirs.

"Tell me walking," she said. "The light's going, and I'd still rather not be standing here past dusk — reason or no reason."

Her daughter almost smiled at that, the old smile, not the new careful one, and fell into step beside her. Órla listened to her explain roots and layers and a word — Etheric — that sat strangely in a voice that had once sung on a dock stage on Eden and thought: there she is. Further off than I'd like. Still mine.

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