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Bubochka, a fluffy white rabbit, sitting inside a large brown mug filled with pink and white marshmallows, surrounded by more marshmallows on the plate below.

Bubochka (Rabbit, Smart Pet, Trainee)

Time
2826 UCSD, Deep Winter — some days after the crossing, Drithane reckoning
Location
Drithane (Bríd System), Gleann na gCaorach valley chain

Bubochka's report on the whole affair ran to a page and a half, which was long for her, and she rewrote it twice to get the order right. What happened, then what worked, then what she thought — Barsik was strict about keeping the last part last and shortest.

What worked came in two kinds, and the difference between them was the finding.

The dogs were the first kind. Muffin's whole method was a question — wouldn't it be easier to say yes? — and the dogs simply did not have anywhere to put the question. Like Thrum, she wrote, then crossed it out, because it was not like Thrum. Thrum could not hear the question. The dogs heard everything and had no use for it. They were not resisting Muffin. They were working, and Muffin was a sheep in the wrong field, and that was the entire conversation. You cannot wear down someone who is not holding anything against you. You are just weather to them, and they are a wall.

The warden was the second kind, and the harder one to write up, because the warden did the exact thing Barsik said Eden could not arrange. She refused it. Out loud. In front of people. First try, four seconds, no apology — and then the valley copied her, not because she told them to but because copying kept things was what the valley did. Bubochka thought about the crossing night, all those houses turning their own lights out with nobody making them, and wrote her one sentence of what-she-thought: this valley practises saying no to itself, kindly, on a schedule, and so nobody here is out of practice when something else asks.

Filed. Not volunteered.

The delegation leaves after the next crossing, and the shuttle manifest has a line on it shaped like a small animal, and nobody has decided anything yet. Bubochka has logged the question and both possible endings, and has begun, quietly, sitting where the quartermaster can see her at loading times. It is not volunteering. It is just standing where the right reader is.

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